The Window – SunWinks! January 18, 2015: Signed, Sealed, Delivered.

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The window
Into the past
Remote control
Fast roll
Roll, roll the barrel
On parade
Khaki apparel
Guns and men
Of great renown
I want the smiling clown

Past and present intertwined
Some stories much maligned
No, that wasn’t so
What do you know?
I remember well
Sometimes ‘twas worse than hell
Now the music’s fine
In your arms divine

There’s not much left
For you and me
Colours sinking soon
Into Eternity


© Copyright 2015 Irina Dimitric. All rights reserved.



About irinadim

Kookaburra sweet, you neither chirp nor tweet. Your laughter is much like mine, my cackle is much like thine. We are two sister souls, one clad in feathers, the other in clothes. ~ Irina ~ I’m a budding blogger. Poetry and photography are my newest passions, living in perfect harmony inspiring each other. I like both free verse and form poetry and am quite proud to let you know that I am the creator of a new form named ‘tercetonine’. Blog Name: Irina's Poetry Corner Blog URL:
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18 Responses to The Window – SunWinks! January 18, 2015: Signed, Sealed, Delivered.

  1. terramere says:

    I see clearly through your window and hug you from the same side.

  2. Window is a powerful symbol. Beautiful!

  3. Did you write this? So pretty! Thank you for sharing!

    Anyhoo, I found your blog through a fellow blogger, and just wanted to stop by and say hi! It would totally make my day if you did the same.. or better yet, keep in touch! ❤ –

    • irinadim says:

      Yes, Gingi, I write poetry. Writing poetry and photography are my recent passions. Thanks for your kind comment. I’ve just visited your nice blog and connected with you. Cheers 🙂 Irina

  4. Hi Irina, The window here is an amazing symbol and your line “I want the smiling clown” really made me realize the depth of sadness held within the lines. I’m opening up the window and letting in fresh air ❤

    • irinadim says:

      Thank you, dear Chrsty. I just realised I didn’t respond to your lovely comment. Yes, it is a sad poem. Of course, a window can be a bright symbol too, like the window in your comment. 🙂

  5. Aquileana says:

    Absolutely tocuhing and beautiful dear Irina… All my best wishes to you. Aquileana 😀

  6. Beautiful poem! I read the sunwinks challenge and Sylvia Plath’s Daddy, but don’t know where to start writing a poem for the challenge! Will have to think about it.

  7. I managed to write one too, it is called Rain 🙂

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