Kookaburra
Mindful Poetry Contest 2013 – Tercetonine
Tug-of-love
(a cranky and gobby dedication to my kids)
Excited, I arrive in a city I love
Abundant bird life, cooing dove
And that pesky kookaburra, so rowdy and cranky.
Google-oogle-oogle him; you will find
Laughing habits fair split to bust your mind
Opens wide his beak, on and on his warbly, wobbly, gobby technique
And the Apostle Bird with very a long tail
They form a breeding group with a dominant male
Now there’s true reverence, a little critter with transcendence
And there’s the colourful Purple-Crowned-Lorikeet
To find a bird like that, such a gob-stopping treat
Brisbane, city now seen from above, gripping me with this tug-of-love
Benita k. (c) 10.4.2013
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Benita’s beautiful poem was a strong contender for the Poem-of-the-Day prize in Susan Budig’s Mindful Poetry Contest 2013 in which my creation, the Tercetonine, featured as a challenge on Day 8. I was honoured by Susan’s request to act as a judge for that day and realised what a hard job she has when she must pick the winner every day during the month-long contest. It was indeed rewarding to read the 16 lovely Tercetonines, but it was very, very hard to choose the winner. I was tossing between a light-hearted and a more serious theme. The more serious theme won – the runner-up was Benita’s light-hearted poem ‘Tug-of-love’. I wrote then that I wished there was some acknowledgement for the runner-up because I wanted so much to give it to this poem. Well, I’m doing it now. 🙂
I was thrilled when Benita accepted my invitation to appear on my blog. Benita can be contacted on Facebook and at www.gather.com.
Benita Kape: Active in small Gisborne writing group during the nineties. From the millennium became involved with haiku (World Haiku Club) on-line receiving an Honourable Mention in Mainichi Daily News 2002 end-of-year haiku selection. The following year William J. Higginson (author of The Haiku Handbook) invited her to work collaboratively with nine other global poets as a direct global haiku response to the outbreak of the war in Iraq in a Kasen Renku titled “On The Road to Basra” which appears on-line. Other work appears on-line in nzepc – (fugacity and oban seminars); Haibun Today, Lynx, Simply Haiku, also on-line and in the New Zealand print journal of haiku, tanka, haibun and related genres, Kokako. On Nov 1st Benita will be reading at a National Poetry Conference in Hastings, New Zealand. Since 2006 she has been a member of Gather.com.
Happy reading, Benita! 🙂
© irina dimitric 2013
Now, that’s my idea of paradise but a bit further from the city 😉
Australian cities are unique-there’s a leafy paradise with birds everywhere. 🙂
How amazing!
A wonderful poem.
Thanks for commenting, Anita. I think Benita did a wonderful job.
you are right I would quail at the thought of judging poetry every day!!
Indeed! Susan, our mentor in Mindful Poetry group at Gather, is an amazing lady. Thanks for the like and comment.
😉
I agree absolutely
Many thanks Irina for putting this together so splendidly. And many thanks for the kind comments above.
My pleasure, Benita. I’m so glad you’re pleased with the post.
All fine. xxooxx
Great! 🙂 xxxoooxxx
The gather site was a great place to share writing and poetry. I think we may have lost it. Approaching on seven months and it still does not work for everyone.
Yes, that is so sad because it was an excellent format but with no notifications coming back to us now makes it less workable. I intend to go with what we are getting there as much as I can.