shorn and manicured to clean
green sterility
……….
My lawn is a wild
meadow where grasses of all
kinds grow and prosper
……….
(Oh no, these are not caterpillars!)
……….
In my lawn, cheerful
golden dandelions dance
in the summer breeze
The fluffy ones are
ready to fly to the end
of the horizon
………
Somewhere there in the
clover patch there’s a four-leaf
Haven’t found it yet!
But I found a bug
sitting pretty, sitting still
meditating… Wow!
So, learn a lesson
form the modest bug, sit still
and meditate now!
Smile and be grateful
for the splendour around you
Have a lovely day!
………..
Copyright 2013 Irina Dimitric
O what a gloriously lovely poem! Thank you for sharing x
Thank you so much for your kind comment. Much appreciated. 🙂
x
My pleasure, sweet lady. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. 🙂
You have put wonderful creative endeavour into both haiku and photo essay. It is often the simple grasses of the fields, the daisies and the dandelions that bring inspiration. Lovely Iriina.
Benita, I’m so glad you liked my creation. I like my wild lawn because it reminds me of the meadows in my home country. I used to find a four-leaf clover quite often. Thanks so much for commenting.
Wonderful photos and writing, Irina!
Thank you so much, Aaron, for stopping by. I do appreciate your encouraging comment.
This is lovely and warm–makes me long for spring! I especially loved the haiku about the fluffy ones! Brilliantly penned, Irina 🙂
Thanks, Caroline. I’m so glad you like it. The fluffy ones look so beautiful. 🙂
What a lovely poem!!! Have a lovely day x
Thanks, Pernille, for stopping by. I’m so glad you like my post. Nice day to you too. 🙂
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Irina has always been a very creative soul and her creativity she generously shared through the different mediums: painting, photography, dance, acting and poetry. Whichever medium Irina chooses she engages her audience and gets acknowledgement and admiration. This little piece is well written and well presented.
Thank you for stopping by, Branka. I’m glad you like my little piece and your very generous comment is much appreciated. 🙂
My lawn would enjoy your lawn.
Hahaha…which means it’s like mine. Thanks for visiting my blog, Sheila.
Wonderful Haiku.Wishing you and yours a blissful Holiday season.jalal
Thank you so much, Jalal. Happy holidays to you and your loved ones.
Hi Irina…
Well I guess we are having a renga here (I mean more than one haiku, right?. Check out this link http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5788 )
I totally enjoyed the post…
I love the way you have highlighted all those the natural pressences. Your lawn is a great poetic source my dear!…
“Somewhere there in the/ clover patch there’s a four-leaf/ Haven’t found it yet!…
I am sure you will find it !!!
All the best for you… See you at twitter, Aquileana 🙂
Hi Aquileana,
Guess what…I’ve never heard of renga before, so I’ve looked up the link and yes, you’re right, it’s a kind of renga. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. And thank you again for being a mentor.
I’ll keep looking for the four-leaf clover.
Hugs xxx Irina 🙂
Talking about Twitter … Aquileana 😉
Aww thanks so much, Aquileana. Now, if I examine this photo carefully, I might find the four-leaf clover. 🙂
Yes I am sure you will find it… (I am now staring at the photo too)…
Hugs to you & I am wishing you a great week ahead;
Aquileana 🙂
Quite a poetic feat! Delightful!
Thank you so much for appreciating my work, Jane. Cheers 🙂 Irina